After my chat with Mario I had a chat with Pete, he went in to great detail of what he thought my novel was missing, he gave me a lot of great ideas including to add a few pages in at the beginning, a pan across the city, to breathe some more life in to it, "The city is usually a character", he asked me to add in a few panels to specific pages that would flesh out locations a little bit more, this is great feedback and I am very pleased with it, other than a few minor things he was quite happy with it.
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